So the day has arrived – you have finally got a story in the media. You pick up the paper and flick through quickly to find your story. There it is! It’s a great feeling. Then you read it, and it’s not exactly what you had in mind. You wish they’d used a different quote, included another bit of information or mentioned your new initiative…
According to a recent study by PR firm, Burston Marsteller, there’s a huge gap in the messages Australian businesses want in the media and what actually ends up in print.
Comparing key messages in 137 media releases to articles published, the study found that 74% of the time, the messages were different.
It certainly shows that getting your message in the media isn’t always easy.
To help increase your chances of getting the publicity you want, it’s worth investing some thought into what it is you want to say, before you write your press release.
Ask yourself, what do you want your audience to know? Write out some statements in dot point form and rank them in order of importance. The top three should be the basis for your key messages. Now to get them into a format that’s likely to get published…
Here are PR Guru’s top 5 tips on getting your messages in-print:
- Avoid clichés and say something meaningful. Journalists can see through PR hype and glaze over when reading corporate jargon. Statements like “it’s been an amazing journey” or “we’re thrilled by…” make journalists yawn. Use quotes in your press release to make an informative statement that you want your audience to hear.
- Where possible be specific, don’t generalise. Media are interested in the detail. So when you say something like “it’s improved our business efficiency and increases sales”, explain how and by how much. When you use numbers, they’re likely to get a run.
- Don’t make unsubstantiated claims. For example, don’t claim to be unique, the largest, the product of choice or the best without being able to prove it in the same sentence. Focus on the facts to boost your credibility with the media.
- Offer timely comment. Be aware of hot-topics, issues and events happening around the time of your planned announcement and where appropriate, tie your statements into these.
- Be consistent. This means picking out the top three things that you want your audience to know about your news and using them in your press release and weaving them into your interviews with journalists.
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